Eschews avatars
That was fun. If this was your first effort, KEEP IT UP. You've got an excellent eye for room design, aesthetics, and what's "fun"; a full hack of yours would be awesome.
For your edit: Under "Game Behavior", there's a checkable box that will make you immediately spawn from your ship, making this hack truly one-room. Also, if you want it to be beatable, the room right after Mother Brain triggers the end-of-game state; fighting Mother Brain herself does nothing but start the timer. You could switch the "you win" room to that, just for giggles.
@GK: I really don't see what makes a hack "bad". It's a free game made by someone interested only in amusing other people; you're putting yourself in a very awkward place complaining about it. Of course there are different styles of room design, and some of these are arguably worse than others (if I may note your "Short Metroid", which was supposed to be beaten via a glitch that works only on console), so some constructive criticism is probably a good thing. But seriously, complaining about rom hacks? That's just ridiculous.
For your edit: Under "Game Behavior", there's a checkable box that will make you immediately spawn from your ship, making this hack truly one-room. Also, if you want it to be beatable, the room right after Mother Brain triggers the end-of-game state; fighting Mother Brain herself does nothing but start the timer. You could switch the "you win" room to that, just for giggles.
@GK: I really don't see what makes a hack "bad". It's a free game made by someone interested only in amusing other people; you're putting yourself in a very awkward place complaining about it. Of course there are different styles of room design, and some of these are arguably worse than others (if I may note your "Short Metroid", which was supposed to be beaten via a glitch that works only on console), so some constructive criticism is probably a good thing. But seriously, complaining about rom hacks? That's just ridiculous.