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<b>DISCLAIMER: NO SEXUAL REFERENCES INTENDED</b>



MY LIFE AS CHERRY PIE

Suddenly there was light, I saw it, I was an opaque white liquid covering delicate insides. It was all fine, until someone walked in. He placed me into a chamber, the hottest place I had ever been. My outside started turning solid, it was so hot. After such, it was browned, so much pain, but I lost feeling. For 30 entire minutes, this went on. Pure suffering, until I was taken out.
It seemed cold, and it still hurt, like a lingering pain. He held up a metal, rather shiny apparatus which he plunged into me violently like a savage beast. The red, delicate insides started seeping out into the open, it hurt. The flow of crimson liquids was enough to sicken a man, or appetize one.
He disemboweled me, leaving part of me behind, but I could still feel it. I could feel everything, as he put the part of me he took into his mouth, the crimson filling falling out onto his lip like a monster. Slowly, he consumed me, but that was not the end, not even close.
Part of me moved, moved into a pit of acids that were far worse than the chamber, burning me slowly but surely. Hours, countless hours, I was in this acid, before I was dropped, I fell into a tube. Parts of me were being sucked out, sent to other places. I was sucked out into a larger tube, soon after.
I was brown by then, all of my usefulness removed. I was simply attached to another mass of useless gunk, where we waited. Suddenly, I was ejected, into a liquid bowl that was drained.
Pipes everywhere that just flowed on. Eventually, I ended up in another mass of water. It was filled with salt. I sank to the bottom, where I would then kill countless animals and contribute to global warming in some roundabout way. The sad part, is that the part of me left in the pan shall suffer the same fate.
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I like how you explained everything that would happen, except from the pie's point of view.  It also has a lot of detail.  But it makes me think of if that happened to a human, thus sickening me.
red chamber dream
Yeah, it really made me think, man. Excellent job explaining everything so well.
Am looking forward to reading future work from you.
Yeah, I'm definitely looking forward to future work from you, mangadood.  You made a story about cherry pie that was quite interesting and most intriguing.

Oops, forgot to rate it.  I give it 4.5/5.  Very good, especially for a story about cherry pie.
I lol'd up until the brown part, the visualness was too much by then.
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The original intention was for the blood references near the beginning, because everything I do in there is violent, and she said not to make it sarcastic or violent. so I bypassed her "rules." Then it was too short, so I thought, and decided to keep going on what happens after that.
I give you  Arrow  Arrow  Arrow  Arrow  because you managed to create an interesting story about a pie.  No one else I've ever heard of has managed to make something interesting about pie.  Keep up the good work!
Honestly, I wept.
red chamber dream
I've also gotta ask: how could any of that possibly be misconstrued as containing sexual references?
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"I was an opaque white liquid covering delicate insides." That is also, from what I hear from a fellow band member, slang for female genital. I had no idea during the writing of.
red chamber dream
What is, "delicate insides"? Never heard it in my life, but it wouldn't be "slang" anyway-- that's literally what the female genitalia consists of. >_>
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I meant cherry pie. >_> And that is NOT exactly what the female genitals are composed of. If so, I am grossly misinformed
Now, reread the story with thinking of the cherry pie as the female genitalia. This is the point where I applaud mangadood.
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It makes sense up until digestion.

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Why did I put the disclaimer in there again? *cough*