Cook of the Sea
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Since I'm at work for my last day before leaving on vacation and up to my eyeballs in last-minute tasks, naturally I have time to look at this. You know, procrastination and all that.
The main thing I notice is that the two halves of the face don't match, like they're at different scales or something. The left (her left) half of her upper lip is bigger and higher than the right; the left nostril is bigger and placed higher; the left eye looks smaller and perhaps set less deeply. Her ear looks awfully pointy at top, and rather close to the eye, though that might just be a depth-perception thing. The back of her skull looks too rounded, or not rounded enough, or something... this one's hard to pin down in words. I'm expecting something closer to spherical and getting a slightly squashed sphere, I guess. It also seems to meet the back of the neck very high up, or maybe the neck itself is long, but that may just be my not being accustomed to the lack of hair. (Get a haircut!)
Her left shoulder seems somewhat square/flat, but that may be within normal tolerances. The fading-out sketchy line of her right arm (that almost connects with the bottom of her breast) seems too far into the body, but it might not be intended to be a "real" line. The neckline of the top looks unintentionally asymmetric, with a shallower angle on her left shoulder than on her right. The strap on her right shoulder looks a bit odd, too curved or something. Maybe it's the collarbone, which seems to extend pretty far to the side.
Lips seem rather large. African? Too much of the inner corner of the right eye seems visible, or maybe it's just farther from the nose than I feel it should be. Iris looks a bit large compared to the left, and not quite facing the same direction. A bit hard to tell the shape of the top of that eye, perhaps just because of trying to draw in lashes. Cheekbone seems rather prominent for that angle.
Think that's all I got. Nice to see something from you again.
The main thing I notice is that the two halves of the face don't match, like they're at different scales or something. The left (her left) half of her upper lip is bigger and higher than the right; the left nostril is bigger and placed higher; the left eye looks smaller and perhaps set less deeply. Her ear looks awfully pointy at top, and rather close to the eye, though that might just be a depth-perception thing. The back of her skull looks too rounded, or not rounded enough, or something... this one's hard to pin down in words. I'm expecting something closer to spherical and getting a slightly squashed sphere, I guess. It also seems to meet the back of the neck very high up, or maybe the neck itself is long, but that may just be my not being accustomed to the lack of hair. (Get a haircut!)
Her left shoulder seems somewhat square/flat, but that may be within normal tolerances. The fading-out sketchy line of her right arm (that almost connects with the bottom of her breast) seems too far into the body, but it might not be intended to be a "real" line. The neckline of the top looks unintentionally asymmetric, with a shallower angle on her left shoulder than on her right. The strap on her right shoulder looks a bit odd, too curved or something. Maybe it's the collarbone, which seems to extend pretty far to the side.
Lips seem rather large. African? Too much of the inner corner of the right eye seems visible, or maybe it's just farther from the nose than I feel it should be. Iris looks a bit large compared to the left, and not quite facing the same direction. A bit hard to tell the shape of the top of that eye, perhaps just because of trying to draw in lashes. Cheekbone seems rather prominent for that angle.
Think that's all I got. Nice to see something from you again.