Man, it's been awhile since anybody posted music here.
It's good, I like it, but it seems a little like it could use a little more of a melody in it, like it's just a beaty song without much of a feeling. Do you see what I mean? It's kind of hard to explain. Anyway, I'd give it
pretty cool stuff. my only recommendation is to turn the percussion in the first half down just a little bit. you've got some really neat ambient sounds that it overshadows. it doesn't need a stronger melody— it's not that type of song.