A poem

2009-02-18 11:40:29 pm

An untitled poem by BioSpark. The ending is in the spoiler tag.

Come. . .
Come to me. . .
She calls me from the other room.
I follow her call,
I follow my desire.
Slowly I approach her,
ready to turn her on.

We get started;
everything is fine.
Time seems to slow down,
or maybe it really does.
The moment is perfect.
. . . or is it?
This could be better --
I must improve.
I need to be pleasing;
I need to be appealing.

I have to go back
and make it all better.
It needs to be right,
so I have to try.

Wait,
I've done it.
I just saved five frames.

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tomatobob

2009-02-18 11:43:52 pm

One shall stand, one shall ball.

Close this board, there will be no topping this.

Opium

2009-02-19 02:06:11 am

I just pictured BioSpark making a TAS with a big boner

BioSpark

2009-02-19 02:20:41 am

well, metroid fusion is a pretty exciting game...

Quietus

2009-02-19 04:12:30 am

Super Secret Area - Dead Ahead!

Quite a nice poem, with a semi-expected double entendre!

It reminded me of this one.

nate

2009-02-19 12:26:00 pm

great view into your world. have to say i'm glad i could meet such interesting people. the internet is great.

KennyMan666

2009-02-19 08:05:40 pm

Viking

Precursor

Needs more :furretavatar:

Actually what the fuck is up with this, both you and ark changed to anime avatars. This is all nate's fault, isn't it? Isn't it?

I always knew he was up to no good.

(as for the topic at hand, my comments were already delivered.)

arkarian

2009-02-19 11:43:28 pm

red chamber dream

haven't i had mine awhile now?

tomatobob

2009-02-19 11:53:21 pm

One shall stand, one shall ball.

That does not make it right.

Linkavatar for ever!

ryu

2009-02-20 02:49:04 am

Quote:

I always knew he was up to no good.

~~Making trouble in our Metro-Hood ... ?~~

Huh, I never said anything - but nice poem anyways, Bio. D:

Toozin

2009-02-20 04:57:12 am

Not impossible

just highly unlikely

Aw, I was hoping to read about Bio getting laid. Total letdown.

tomatobob

2009-02-20 07:15:53 pm

One shall stand, one shall ball.

In Bio's mind, he just got laid seven times.

Cpadolf

2009-02-20 10:01:56 pm

Almost happy

Totally saw the ending coming, maybe due to recognizing the feeling... Great anyway :)

KennyMan666

2009-02-20 10:34:34 pm

Viking

Precursor

Quote from tomatobob:

In Bio's mind, he just got laid seven times.

Actually, it was just one time, but he redid it from scratch seven times to save a few more frames.

rekameohs

2009-02-20 11:15:30 pm

Anywhere, everywhere

I suddenly feel the urge to make a tas...

Toozin

2009-02-21 05:23:17 pm

Not impossible

just highly unlikely

Well, we just scientifically proved it will get you laid. So go for it.

ryu

2009-02-21 10:33:11 pm

This topic.

JaggerG

2009-02-23 05:07:05 am

Shifty Leader

That M2k2 guy

Quote from Opium:

I just pictured BioSpark making a TAS with a big boner

AHA! You're not female after all! Or maybe I just misinterpreted that sentence....

Also this poem disappointed me, too. I expected it to be about his :52 ss 1% run.